Self-Editing for Fiction Writers

Posted by mindy on 19 September, 2014
Category Book Reviews

I cannot say enough about this book. Renni Brown and Dave King hit pay-dirt when they collaborated on this crown of jewels. I obtained my first copy through the writing program of Long Ridge Writers Group.

I find myself going back to it again and again. Their tone is like having coffee with conversation with an old friend. And that is one of the things that make this book great.

If you're looking for a book on the aspects of writing fiction that does not get preachy- this is The One. Treated with humor and common sense Brown and King get to the basics of working with fiction stories.

Topics covered include: Show and Tell, Characterization and Exposition, Point of View, Dialogue Mechanics, Interior Monologue, Proportion as well as a few others. They also include a number of exercises scattered throughout the book.

My hope is that, if not another collaboration, one of them will write a book / course on the topic of internal monologue.

It's my opinion that if you write fiction, no matter what your specific genre is, then you need a copy of this book.


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Posted by mindy on 14 September, 2014
Category Memorable Quotes

Don't dwell on who let you down, cherish those who hold you up. - Unknown

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Giving Up Cable TV

Posted by mindy on 14 September, 2014
Category General

Some time ago I made the decision and contacted Cable One to cancel the TV portion of my cable service. Since then I've contemplated what I'm actually giving up. Most of the shows that I watch on cable networks are available on DVD. That is, they are old seasons of the shows. So now, instead of watching because the shows just happen to be on- it'll be a deliberate decision and on my time.

So what am I giving up? The primary ones are:

Law & Order SVU
Criminal Minds - now on Netflix (9 seasons)
Ancient Aliens

There are a few other shows but really it's not worth $45 a month. For this amount, I could buy 1 maybe 2 seasons per month on DVD; depending on the show. It'll be worth it; especially since there will be NO commercials!

Besides- TV time tends to rob from writing time. And the writing needs to be my priority. So having the DVDs will give me that flexibility in my schedule.

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Goals Achieved

Posted by mindy on 14 September, 2014
Category Goals


Okay, so it took me longer than expected. I did take a short break to get munchies and a few other things. Still, I've finished the comparing and deleting of the clones for # 38. Now, it looks like I'll be able to get through the copies of # 39 by the end of tonight.

5:43pm DONE!!!!

By 5:45 pm I finished with comparing and deleting the clone files of Psi-B Homecomings.

Along the way I did make some edits. However, phase 2 'the editing stage' will be put on hold for a while. I'm going to set this one aside so that I can focus on "Return' and my Long Ridge Lesson.

Current Stats: Psi- B Homecomings

file size: 387 kb
page count: 188
word count: 59,813


Another goal achieved. Today I finished LRWG Lesson 7 part one- revising the story from a previous lesson. I chose 'Choices' from lesson 4. This is by far the most popular piece among those who've read my work. As it is one of mine. For me, I think that it's because how people respond to it. People view the 3 main characters as I had intended and hoped. They have sympathy for Sharon, adore her best friend Tabitha, and David is a toad.

After yesterday's achievement with Psi-B Homecomings, this feels like a double-victory. I have 2 more parts to write for lesson 7- the cover letter and a note to my instructor. I already expressed to him that I intend to focus on fiction for the remainder of the course. In this letter, I need to tell him is (as it's part of the lesson requirements) about what I intend to write about for lesson 8.

The trick for me is selecting ideal magazines to solicit. It's not intimidating, however, despite the plentiful options in the Market Place book- I can't seem to find one to fit a piece.

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Text Books for Long Ridge

Posted by mindy on 14 September, 2014
Category LRWG

I'm currently working my way through several books as part of the course material from Long Ridge Writers Group. Link to Site

On Writing Well- 6th Edition by William Zinsser

This book is geared towards nonfiction writing, however, as a fiction writer I have found it to be useful. There are many things inside that writers of both will learn from.

In Part 1, Zinsser discusses the topics of simplicity, clutter, style, audience, words, and usage.

I'm through Chapter 1 'The Transaction' in my 2nd read. This chapter sums up the intentions of this book. Along with a comparative anecdote, this chapter discusses what it's like being a writer, what writers are like, and what's at the heart of good nonfiction. The chapter is short and to the point.

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Self-Editing for Fiction Writers by Renni Brown and Dave King
sub-title: How to Edit Yourself Into Print

This book is geared towards fiction writing.

Let me start by saying that I love this book. There are times when I just can't put this book down. I am currently on Chapter 6 "Interior Monologue".

While it is instructive it does not read this way. It's far from preachy. The writers come across as natural. It's as if you're sitting with them having a casual conversation on the subject at hand. They inject humor, common sense, and an intelligence that anyone can understand.

The writers discuss the issues of: show vs. tell, characterization and exposition, point of view, dialogue, interior monologue, voice, and a few other things.

In my opinion if you are a fiction writer this book belongs on your shelf. Not one of us should be without a copy. Not one of us should go or proceed without reading it.

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Freelance Writing for Magazines and Newspapers by Marcia Yudkin

This book is geared towards nonfiction writing; specifically articles for print in magazines and newspapers. Marcia Yudkin goes in to details on the various aspects of the writing process. She includes personal stories making it easy to relate to, between her and her reader.

I've only read chapter 1. So, while I know what the book is about I can't go any further. What I can tell is that Marcia Yudkin has a voice that is easy to read.

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malice, stupidity & ignorance

Posted by mindy on 14 September, 2014
Category Memorable Quotes

Never attribute to malice that which is adequately explained by stupidity or ignorance. The latter are a lot more common than the former.


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